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Cynicism

Bodies of light fill the ocean

Subtle reductionism fills the forum

Empty meaning fills the material world

Sordid thoughts rampage the noosphere.

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Here's to dialogue, Schalkster

Endless speaking fills the airwaves like tempestuous drums

Constantly bickering between fellow men

Like battling banjos, dueling drums

Filling the silent space with incomprehensible words

 

The silence was lost when the speaking started

And the reducing of regular brilliance

And standard luminosity

Started taking place

The essence of creativity forever lost in the abode of regret

Distancing with speaking

Creating dissonance

 

Crush.  Crush.  Crush the stillness.

Crush the meaning

Creating nothing where there was something

And creating something where there didn't need to be anything

The art of unintelligent discord

The violence of the green

 

Sitting in an invisible room surrounded by people I could never possibly want to get to know

Everyone creating something from nothing

Speaking in rhythm to each other's heartbeats

The endless swamp of needing to be heard

With the rain meeting their every word

 

Whatever happened to Spirit in this mess?

Whatever happened to meaning?

It's all a vast expanse of spacious listening

Where nothing takes place but the intelligence of a silent becoming.

 

Lots of love brother.  Hope this helps.

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the cynical anti-poet

Although I take pleasure in the personal energies of communication passed through poems & especially I enjoy the so-called poetic dimensions of all forms human and natural, I must revert (perversely, of course) to a conclusion drawn earlier in life:

I was once a voracious reader and writer of poetry.  Even, predictably, I had strong feelings about its nature and the appropriate methods of furthering its goals in the 21st century.  I did what I thought every true poet did: whole-heartedly oppose the poetry of his day & seek new sparks in a combination of archaic and futuristic styles.  

Yet, after a time, I came to ponder this whole affair.  I asked myself which poets I really liked.  There were a few.  Which of their poems did I truly love?  Again, a few.  And was the entire poem in each case?  No.  It was actually a few lines here or there which set my soul on fire.

So if I really liked only a few lines in a few poems by a few poets -- what right did I have to say I liked poetry?  By my own demonstration, did I not, in principle, dislike 99% of it?  This is the condition rather of a man who despises poetry in general.  

And thus, without losing my pleasure in poetry, I came to denounce it.

 

Thanks, I've been...

Layman Pascal

 

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apologies...again

I need to take this stuff to a therapist.  Sorry to waste your time.